Rory Lewis

Your Standin there, i wonder what you think about as you glance into space.. could it be .... could it be me i only wonder how much you think, think ...

Okay not to be harsh or anything but you need more background info. Like why didn't she cry when her brother died and Is Cindy her mother some how thats ...

Hi! I just wanted to let you know that this is a piece I am writing for school so I will do all the grammar stuff later, but right know ...

I know its not normal to submit the prolouge after the first chapter but i felt that it helps you get to know the characters better. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "They grow up

I really liked this, although Cade has a point it almost seems childish but at the same time Grown up. Anway this poem relates to me in some ways and ...

I really liked both of them The first one would be better though if it was in foucus a little more and the coloring on the secound one but all ...

Hey! sorry its kinda long I couldn't decide when to stop so umm Hope ya like it! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BEEP!BEEP!BEEP! Went the alarm clock that woke up Autumn Hommes e

Hey nice job! I really like the way you wrote this. From what I can tell you don't have that many grammer mistakes, but then again I'm not the best ...

Hey Nice start. Although I really can't picture what Riley, his mom and Claire look like. Its a great start and I think you have potential for a great story. ...